{"id":45124,"date":"2019-07-17T17:06:36","date_gmt":"2019-07-17T16:06:36","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.bmj.com\/bmj\/?p=45124"},"modified":"2019-07-29T09:12:59","modified_gmt":"2019-07-29T08:12:59","slug":"paul-simpson-why-are-the-intros-to-academic-articles-so-boring","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.bmj.com\/bmj\/2019\/07\/17\/paul-simpson-why-are-the-intros-to-academic-articles-so-boring\/","title":{"rendered":"Paul Simpson: Why are the intros to academic articles so boring?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p class=\"standfirst\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Tricks from storytelling could make articles more engaging, says Paul Simpson<\/span><\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"><a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.bmj.com\/bmj\/files\/2019\/07\/DSC07374.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-45130\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.bmj.com\/bmj\/files\/2019\/07\/DSC07374.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"160\" height=\"239\" \/><\/a>Given the drama at the centre of most academic writing on health and medicine, literally life and death, it is astonishing that the introductions to so many academic pieces are so similar and <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">so<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> dull. The great shame is not the dreary writing that readers must wade through, but the lost opportunity to capture minds and influence thinking. Learning a few tricks from storytellers might lead to more engaging articles.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">There are three standard openings to submitted articles that make me involuntarily skip ahead: starting an article with a list of definitions; describing a disease\u2019s global burden; and, referencing any number of political declarations (most commonly the UN\u2019s Sustainable Development Goals). All are legitimate ways to start an article, but I suspect their ubiquity leads many readers to give up or glaze over.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">These familiar opening paragraphs assume that readers are already invested in an article and are only looking for dry facts to get them going. How do we define this problem? How big is this problem? Does it matter to global bureaucracies? Only an article\u2019s authors and a small subset of readers will be invested enough to want such a plain starter. Most will be looking for a reason to care, many would love to be swept along by an article that will engage and inspire.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Will Storr\u2019s recent book, <\/span><a href=\"http:\/\/www.thescienceofstorytelling.com\/the-book\/\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The Science of Storytelling<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">, usefully describes what grabs the attention of readers and does an impressive job of relating his advice to how our brains work. He explains that most stories start with a change that captures a reader\u2019s attention and that curiosity can be piqued by information gaps that people want to fill by reading on. He gives a nice example from the ominous opening to <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Charlotte%27s_Web\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Charlotte\u2019s Web<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">:\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201cWhere\u2019s Papa going with that ax?\u201d\u00a0<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Although Storr\u2019s book focuses on writing fiction, his advice on how to begin a story can be applied to academic writing and reminded me of <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/journals.plos.org\/plosmedicine\/article?id=10.1371\/journal.pmed.1001464\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">an article on road traffic crashes published by <\/span><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">PLOS Medicine<\/span><\/i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">.<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> The piece reflected on an accompanying essay and the WHO\u2019s Decade of Action on Road Safety. It includes a standard paragraph on the global burden of road traffic crashes, but opens by describing the author\u2019s personal story of loss. It still triggers an emotional response in me six years after first reading it. Only the heartless would fail to empathise with the memorable dramatic change in the intro.\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Clearly, having every article start with a deeply personal story isn\u2019t great advice and I wouldn\u2019t encourage attempts at fictionalised dramatic openings. My suspicion is that most editors would generally discourage this because scholarly articles are meant to be factual not emotional. So, how should authors approach the introductions to more prosaic academic pieces?\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">I asked a colleague who has previously slashed at my own lifeless writing with a red pen, Alison Tonks. Alison has edited hundreds of editorials for <em>The BMJ<\/em> and recommends that authors \u201c<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">get straight to the point, tell us what happened, why we should care, and what we should do, all in the first couple of paragraphs. An eye catching title and standfirst helps.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Alison highlighted two recent editorials, one on <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.bmj.com\/content\/365\/bmj.l1938\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">climate change<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> and one on <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.bmj.com\/content\/365\/bmj.l1657\"><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">new hypertension guidelines<\/span><\/a><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> as good examples. On inspection both follow Will Storr\u2019s advice on how to start a story by describing a noteworthy change. Neither intro could be described as flashy but both feel like the start of a story describing a relevant change rather than an encyclopedia entry:\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201c<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">In March, hundreds of thousands of schoolchildren in 2000 cities from 123 countries left school to call for action on climate change.\u201d<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201c<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">The UK\u2019s National Institute for Health and Care Excellence (NICE) has launched an updated draft guideline for the diagnosis and management of hypertension in adults.<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201d<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">Both articles also invite us to read on by offering an information gap. What can we learn from schoolchildren? What\u2019s wrong with the guidelines? But neither article resorts to a blunt question or worse listing all of the items the article is about to cover:\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201cHealth professionals and their organisations must support and learn from the schoolchildren\u2019s action&#8230;\u201d<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">\u201cThe new draft NICE guidance has at least three serious problems.\u201d<\/span><\/em><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">These authors are using storytelling tricks to engage their readers within the first few paragraphs of their articles.\u00a0<\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">If you find that you\u2019ve reflexively written a boilerplate opening, don\u2019t despair. It may be crucial for readers to understand this information in order to follow the important messages in your piece, but you might want to include it a little later in the article. If you need it, keep it. If you don\u2019t, delete it.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400\">My advice is to use these ubiquitous paragraphs as place holders to be rewritten once an article is nearly complete. An introduction is there to engage and situate readers so that they read on. Your readers are more likely to do that if you tell them a good story rather than force them to read a reference manual.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><b><i>Paul J. Simpson<\/i><\/b><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> is The BMJ\u2019s International Editor.<br \/>\n<\/span><\/i><\/p>\n<p><b><i>Competing Interests:<\/i><\/b><i><span style=\"font-weight: 400\"> I bought Will Storr\u2019s book myself and enjoyed it. I don\u2019t have any connection with the author or book\u2019s publisher.\u00a0 <\/span><\/i><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Tricks from storytelling could make articles more engaging, says Paul Simpson [&#8230;]<\/p>\n<p><a class=\"btn btn-secondary understrap-read-more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/blogs.bmj.com\/bmj\/2019\/07\/17\/paul-simpson-why-are-the-intros-to-academic-articles-so-boring\/\">More&#8230;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":45127,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[223],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-45124","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-guest-bloggers"],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v27.5 - https:\/\/yoast.com\/product\/yoast-seo-wordpress\/ -->\n<title>Paul Simpson: Why are the intros to academic articles so boring? - The BMJ<\/title>\n<meta name=\"description\" content=\"Tricks from storytelling could make articles more engaging, says Paul Simpson.\u00a0\" \/>\n<meta name=\"robots\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<link rel=\"canonical\" href=\"https:\/\/blogs.bmj.com\/bmj\/2019\/07\/17\/paul-simpson-why-are-the-intros-to-academic-articles-so-boring\/\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:locale\" content=\"en_US\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:type\" content=\"article\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:title\" content=\"Paul Simpson: Why are the intros to academic articles so boring? 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